Posted by : RioZee Monday, April 8, 2013

Mind was revolting,

Full of warning,

Urgent need of mentoring,

why the hell poetizing,

My brave heart shaking,

May it be collapsing,

Jigar muradabadi came flashing,

Become founder of club lazying,

Here everyone lying,

Could order the one sitting,

Or the one sitting

Order the one standing,

Said he chuckling,

Enter the club lying,

Enjoy the fun in ordering,

Some sense was coming,

Little head wondering,

What would be my ending.

(Written for NaPoWriMo 2013 - 30 Poems in 30 Days challenge!)







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  1. Sorry PL for smiling at your tough moment
    :-P

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  2. Nootun poet hoechi, ektu adjust hole time lagbe, boss

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  3. Oops couldn't I make myself clear that I smiled at your restless moments, not on your 'new but not novice' poetic skills :-(

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  4. I had got that. But fact will be fact

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